Sunday, December 7, 2008

The rain is saying tip, tap, tip, tap

The rain is falling on my window
I can hear it saying tip, tap, tip, tap, tip, tap.
I hear the rain saying tip, tap, tip, tap, tip, tap.
Just like a little mouse that is on a dirty floor,
I can hear the little cat that is on a step.
The little cat tries to scurry but
the little mouse is too good for the little cat!

The end

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

This is a great poem, Izzie! Good job.

Just *Olga* said...

Isabel, what a wonderful poem! You create such a vivid picture, I can almost see that little mouse scurrying off, and the fat lazy cat trying to catch it... Beautiful work!

Uncle Barney said...

Great poem Isabel. Im proud that you are writing such wonderful, fun stories!!!!

I can't wait to read more!!!!